A report in every storm

When your pipes leak, you get in a plumber. Need some handmade cupboards built? A carpenter’s your man or woman, guvnor.

And if that manuscript of yours (or mine) isn’t quite cutting the mustard, where all the feedback is generally encouraging, but there’s still no cigar, who you gonna call? A manuscript assessment service, that’s who.
A good report will not only highlight weaknesses and inconsistencies, it will also tell you what you’re doing right. Objective feedback can put your work under a microscope, which is both enlightening and disconcerting. Best of all, you have consider the feedback before you without the opportunity to argue your case and play 20 justifications. (No, my character has to play with a yo-yo at crime scenes because it’s a metaphor for how she keeps an investigation going.)
Reports do not always make comfortable reading I’ve had three, over the years, for different books. Each taught me something about my writing and something about myself. Those same comments that had me coughing derisively (try it it’s a real skill) later received nods of approval when I sat down again to review the evidence.
Summary feedback will focus on technique, characterisation, plotting, pace, description and dialogue. Which is a lot to fit into one report. Illustrative examples will help drive the points home. And then there’s the manuscript mark-up. The right comments, perfectly placed, can act as a pivot point to lever your work over a hurdle. Those eureka moments really can make all the difference.
Although it can seem expensive unless you’re fortunate enough to receive a bursary it’s also an investment in your craft. And it may be your first opportunity to get feedback from a professional with experience in the industry. (Incidentally, always ask for the organisation’s background and track record before you make any decision.)
An assessment of your manuscript might shatter your dreams and leave you running screaming to the hills. Or, duly acted upon, it just might be the difference between ‘no thank you’ and ‘yes please’.


  1. Freya Morris says:

    Right on Derek. I had a critique that wasn't all too impressive but the critique I received on my first three chapters as part of the recent agent submission review I did was awesome! We all need a little distance from our work – sometime it takes being a whole different person to see it fresh.

  2. Derek says:

    Hi Freya, it can be a little pick and mix as far as critiques go. Word of mouth recommendation helps, as well as asking to see an example of the scope and depth of feedback given. Like all investments, choose wisely!

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